Hi Dana, hope this finds you well! I’m reaching out because we help companies like yours unlock content efficiencies. We write thirty SEO articles a month and it save you time. Would love to jump on a quick call.
- No number
- Two clichés
- Broken clause
Practice, then send
Learn to selllike you mean it.
A daily coach for founders doing their own outbound. It never writes for you. It marks what you wrote, names the habit, and makes you say it better.
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Grounded in your product, pricing and competitors
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Level 3 of 6 · price pushbackDay 12 streak
3 earlier turns
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Checked your line againstyour pricing11 past sessions2.1s
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54/100
- Framing ↑
- Proof points ↓ 3rd time
- No next step
Say it again, with the number in it.
Write your line again…
Level 3 to send
- Six levels, ending in sell a pen to Buffett
- Built from your own product, on the paid plan
- Ten minutes, most days
The same DM, written twice.
Dana, you publish two posts a week and none of them rank in the top ten. We write thirty SEO articles a month and I will spend one on you: name the keyword you most want and have not won, and I will send back the article. One word and you have it by Friday.
- Her problem first
- One number
- One ask
Nothing here was rewritten for you. Both versions are yours, the second one written after the coach kept refusing the first.
Buyers built out of your own pricing page.
Nothing generic. Each one knows what you charge, who you lose to, and where your story gets thin. Free sessions run against a product we wrote, so you can see the loop before you describe your own.
Generated fromyourstartup.com$400 a monthloses to freelancerscontent leads at SaaS
Dana Keller
Head of Content, 40-person SaaS
Level3PractiseMarcus Reyes
Founder, agency of six
Level4PractiseSara Bhatt
VP Marketing, Series B
Level5PractiseThe pen
Unlocks when you clear level five
Level6Locked
The lines that end outbound.
You will hear these until you retire. Practice is where you decide what you say back.
- “Send me a deck.”
The trap
You send the deck, thank her, and never hear back.
The move
- “We already have someone for that.”
The trap
You start listing what you do better, and she stops reading.
The move
- “That is twice what we pay now.”
The trap
You discount, and the price becomes the conversation.
The move
Ten minutes, most days. That is the whole ask.
You do not need anyone to email. The buyer is generated, so a session is there on the days you have no outbound at all. Rest days are built in and a missed one is repairable, because the streak is not the point, the profile it builds is.
Last four weeks
23 of 28 days kept
Things it will not do for you.
Every one of these is a decision, not a missing feature.
Write the message
Nothing finished lands in the box before you have written your own version of the line.
You rewrite it. That is the only part that makes you better.
Make the call
No dialer, no voice, no automation, no bot sending things on your behalf.
A rehearsal room and a second pair of eyes. Text only.
Report you to anyone
No manager dashboards, no team leaderboards, no seats to be assigned to.
Your worst sessions stay between you and the coach.
Claim customers it does not have
No logos, no testimonials, no counts of happy users on this page.
Come back when there are some and they will be real.
Track your prospects
No contact records, no statuses, no pipeline to keep up to date.
That is a different product, and other tools already do it well.
That is the whole product.See a marked session
What it costs, and what free gets you.
$39$19a month
Launch price, while it lasts
The free tier is not a trial. No card, nothing expires, and the profile you build on it comes with you if you upgrade.
Free practice runs against a product we made up. Paying moves it onto yours, and lets you run a real message past the coach before you send it.
| What you get | Free | $19 a month |
|---|---|---|
| The product | One we made up | Yours |
| Levels | One to three | All six, pen at five |
| Sessions | One a day | Unlimited |
| Real-message review | No | Yes |
| Your weak spots | Kept | Kept |
It goes to $39 once the launch is over, and the alternatives start at $55 a seat or a call with their sales team. Cancel from the settings page in two clicks.